"I really want to wear the purple dress we have, Erin, but I can't find it," said Blake.
"I'll go see if it is in my closet," said Erin.
Erin comes back to the room empty handed.
"I couldn't find it, do you have it Sarah?" said Erin.
"I will go look," said Sarah.
Sarah knew the dress was in her room but she wanted to wear it that night to impress her date.
"Nope, wasn't there," said Sarah.
"That's so weird, I guess I will just wear the black one but I really hate it," said Blake.
That night the three girls were all getting ready. Sarah left early to get ready at a friends house, to make sure they didn't see her wearing her dress.
"Do you think Sarah has something I could wear besides this black dress?" said Blake.
"I don't know just go look, she won't care," said Erin.
Blake walked into Sarah's and was shocked at what she saw. All of Blake and Erin's missing clothes throughout the years were in Blake's closet.
"Erin, come look at this. We have to do something about this," said Blake
To get back at Sarah, they decided to wear her all of her favorite things. They wore her dresses, her shoes and even her jewelry. When they showed up the the event they were wearing long coats. They walked up to Sarah and took their coats off.
"We know how you stole all of our clothes so now we are stealing yours and we are moving out," said Blake and Erin
Sarah, shocked, left the event and never saw the girls again.
Author's Note: My story is a silly spin off of Bear-Woman and Deer-Woman. In the original story, the bear mother kills the deer mother and in return the deer children kill the bear children. I took the story as being like "an eye for an eye" and that is why I made my story the way I did. It might be a little silly but I think the overall theme is similar to the original story.
I like how you included dialogue and a narrator in the story. I feel like this story is relatable to anyone with a sister or friend! I feel like people can also relate to having a bad roommate! Either way, I think that it is great that you wrote a story that many people can understand how the other feels. I read bear-woman and deer-woman story too, and I can definitely see how the two compare. Great job!
ReplyDeleteHi Kaylee, I enjoyed reading your story. Think you did a great job accomplishing your goal of making the story “an eye for an eye”. I was easily able to see this perspective before I even read your author’s note. I also agree with Hannah, I enjoyed the “live action” back-and-forth between the characters. Overall, your story was easy and fun to read.
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